Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary world, it is obvious that buyers are being surrounded by a variety of advertisements posed by companies which make selecting favorable goods seems problematic. Subsequently, it is believed that modern commercials not only has great impact on customers but also develops artificial needs. I totally agree with this statement.
Firstly, advertisements are able to create positive impression about a brand in the minds of the consumers. Indeed, that more frequent is the commercials more money is thought to have been spent on them by producers has lead customers to the illusion that these companies’ goods are of good quality in a sense that cash has a link to the standard of products. Therefore, it is of no doubt that advertising is an important extrinsic cue signaling product quality to purchasers.
Secondly, nowadays, plentiful of firms has utilized commercials to exaggerate the features of their products. On the ground that there is no limit on the imagination applied in the advertisements on modern media such as television and internet , people are tend to be deceived into purchasing goods with counterfeit appetizing characteristic posed by producers without any thorough considerations.
Some might claim that intensive growth of sales of people’s main consumer products is due to their needs; however, ever since the advent of modern social gizmos, producers has taken various measures to market their commodities to customers, namely tempting advertising slogan on a billboard or different types of media which perhaps induce people to choose unneeded goods. A typical example might be the mobile phone. To exemplify, recently, Apple corporation has spent a great deal of cash hiring celebrities after whom people usually model themselves to advertise their products, which made purchasers desire to stay up with latest trend of their idols, especially youth.
In a nutshell, commercials act as a good approach for companies to promote marketing figures by influencing customer’s purchasing decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49367088608 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1322331927 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623417721519 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5887572472 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107860115427 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360011850417 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254708639215 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558074480602 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187128430983 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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