Reserch suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crime when set free. What are the reasons? What can done to solve the problem?
It is true that there are a significant number of criminals re-commit crimes after they are released into prison. Reasons for this vary, but this issue can be handled by adopting possible solutions, as will now be discussed.
There are several reasons why many lawbreakers continue to commit crimes when they are set free. Firstly, offenders are influenced by others in jail. It is a violent place in which punishes many types of criminals including dangerous criminals. This environment may have an impact on lawbreakers seriously. Thus, offenders tend to be imminent the behavior of another or they form a network to commit crimes in the future. Secondly, it is difficult for ex-offenders to reintegrate into society. People are usually discriminated against offenders after they are released from prison. Few employers are enthusiastic about hiring felons, which leads criminals to be unable to find a job to support themselves. Therefore, they can turn to a life of crime when no opportunity presents themselves.
However, a range of available options can be taken to tackle the problem. The first solution is to provide education for offenders in prison. Criminals should be given a chance to rehabilitate and find a job. They must show that they are caple of leading a positive lifestyle before being released into society. For example, some universities in the USA and UK offer degree programs to enable offenders to gain the qualification. Another solution is to segregate the most dangerous criminals from others to prevent intimidation and bullying in prison. Thorough psychological and psychiatric tests should be conducted to determine whether they become repeat offenders upon entering society.
In conclusion, the fact that the re-committing crime rate has increased is attributable to several factors. However, this can be resolved by taking the above suggestions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34006734007 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01657195823 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1707984974 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.3 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.85 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165791343496 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532007290256 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575910008021 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109919561266 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358007666105 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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