Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is true that economic development has both positive and negative effects. While it can be argued that economic growth is the only solution to improve hunger and poverty, I believe that it is necessary to defend the environment against unsustainable economic development.
On the one hand, there are those who believe that economic growth is a sole cure for people to alleviate poverty. Firstly, the development of economics offers many job opportunities. In this condition, people seek simply vocation which provides them with stable earning. Thus, they can eradicate poverty and afford the basic necessities of their life. Secondly, if many businesses are successful, they will contribute greatly to the national budget through the tax system. Authorities would use this fund to allocate for building houses for homeless people or doing charity. In this way, the government can save people from starvation and poverty.
On the other hand, I side with those who argue that rapid development is devasting to the nature surrounding. Firstly, in order to raise productivity, people have carried out many deeds that cause a negative effect on the environment. Farmers are using more chemicals in agriculture while factories are burning many fossil fuels and release millions of tons of emissions into the surrounding every year. This led to serious pollution in both the air environment and the water environment. Moreover, manufactories also create a huge amount of waste, which has an adverse impact on rivers and oceans. Take Formosa, a steel factory in Ha Tinh has resulted in massive death of fish in oceans in Ha Tinh province because of their garbage.
In conclusion, despite the undeniable advantage of economic growth, I firmly believe that unsustainable development should be stopped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 320, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ey can eradicate poverty and afford the basic necessities of their life. Secondly, if many busine...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31228070175 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.897051706 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2371668476 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210095844403 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629329826182 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696299703924 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146359247885 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855638930181 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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