Responsible tourist could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Travelers are crucial to not only the tourism but also the native culture and environment of every where they set foot on. There are several opinions that being a responsible tourist is infeasible. This essay strongly disagree with those view and it will discuss the reasons why visitors are obliged to protect and preserve the tourist destinations.
First of all , there are reciprocal benefits between tourists and ethnical sites which must coexist. When you decide to travel, your desire is to gain a deeper insight into other cultures and broaden your horizons. You have chances to contemplate historical landmarks or spectacular natural landscapes. Visitors tend not to mind abandoned places as they think it is ancient and will be demolished as well as reconstructed one day. However, to abide by tourist attractions also means to respect its ethnicity and nature. Travelers' behaviors are of paramount importance to the cultures and environment. Everything they do might have either good or bad impacts on where they are.
Another point is that it is doable for each of us to be a responsible tourist. Visitors can start with small deed such as picking up litters, not making drawings on the walls or not urinating at improper places. All of these tiny things can bring a range of benefits for both tourists and local residents. On the other hand, government should introduce laws regarding preservation of popular tourist destinations. People who have behaviors which adversely affect the culture and environment should be fined heavily and banned from these places in a certain period of time. It is not sophisticated as they think to be a virtuous and decent travelers.
To sum up, tourists should be compelled to act properly at local sites in order to show respect to the native residents and their cultures.
- Responsible tourist could preserve both the local culture and environment. Some people think it is impossible to be a responsible tourist. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 78
- Individual can do nothing to improve the environment, only government and big companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, regarding, so, well, such as, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79332260666 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606666666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0900076063 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300324964096 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876758172888 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631100922638 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167299422029 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045641717586 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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