Individual can do nothing to improve the environment, only government and big companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question of whether each of us can be of help to the environment has been a matter of debate since the beginning of twenty-first century. While some people argue that only government and big companies have great effect on the environment, I believe that we all have to show a sense of responsibility for protecting our planet.
First of all, every small deed we have done has a great deal of negative impacts on the environment. People tend to think that they can do nothing to make the world better, they therefore neglect the nature. Tiny acts such as picking up litters, throwing garbage or urinating in proper places can bring a range of benefits for the earth. Moreover, cognitive development of each individual is of paramount importance. We must enhance our awareness of environmental problems, which can lead to a lot of beneficial acts.
On the other hand, both government and big companies have serious influence on citizen. With regard to the government, they can enter upon environmental campaigns in order to save the planet as well as heighten people's sense of environment. As for big companies, their products are the fundamental element in spreading messages to the customers. If companies provide eco-friendly products or services, it will completely affect customers' minds as well as satisfy their needs. As a result, clients and companies not only receive reciprocal benefits but also preserve and improve the nature.
In conclusion, although those who argue that the ecosystem is only made better by the government and big companies, I believe that everyone has duty along with responsibility to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether each of us can be of help to the enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9939490875 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9088260318 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280642121195 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832709324466 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455453893118 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150911548072 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346581996427 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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