As a result of advances in medical care, the average life expectancy for both men and women is increasing. Do you think most of people see this positive delepment. What are the advantages of an aging population for individual and society.
The average life expectancy for both genders has increased day by day in all countries. This all are happening with the advancement in the medical science. This development is a positive but, it has some negative impacts on the person as well as society. This essay examines the both views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are some benefits why long life has important in people and social life. Firstly, more and more people are available to do work in period which, can helpful to increase the economical level. The society also give experience and advice to the older people in business, education and in others field because of their experiences. The last but not the least, the children can get benefits from love and care of their grandparents. For example, today, parents are busy in their heavy schedule and they have not time to children in that time, grandparents can take care their grandchildren.
No doubt, it has many benefits increased age brings several disadvantages. The older age people can suffer with chronically which, make the problem of government and other one. Because, treatment of this disease is expensive. As well as, the government will give the pensions to this people and the authorities can use the money for other purpose such as, education health, infrastructure and so on. In addition to this, the higher longevity, translates to lesser number of young people entering the workforce.
In conclusion, though the life expectancy is the boon of people. However, it has some drawbacks which, cannot be undermined example, unemployment, financial problems, poverty and many more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he problem of government and other one. Because, treatment of this disease is expensive...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he government will give the pensions to this people and the authorities can use the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16104868914 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82090854227 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7744702956 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217971204473 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666575355601 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413755773339 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123220797221 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070584233613 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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