Today children are living under more pressure from the society than the children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is an incontrovertible fact that in this technical era, people are enjoying more comfortable life. However the society have pressure on the offsprings today as compared to older time children. I vehemently agree with this statement and rendered my view points in the upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are some reasons why the children are living under pressure from the society. The first is that competitive era, nowadays young one are compete with children from all over world. They are not gain good marks in study and they are feeling pressure because of it. Secondly in the society they are seeing more projects rather than past times. For example, if someone have iPhone or expensive watches the another children want to buy it. But they cannot afford it and they are feeling pressure to acquire this items.
To continue with my view points, they also have a pressure related to culture because most children are adopting the Western or Global culture. But, the society is not accepted and the always tell them for traditional culture. They are in a dilemma because of it and feel stress which is not in earlier generation.
In my opinion the earlier children has not stress related to academic, employment and culture although they have no too much technical gadgets. But the young one has more stress because of advancement in recent children.
In conclusion, the children are facing more stress because of more desires but if they are living in their limits then definitely they can enjoy the peaceful and stress free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95402298851 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5034788848 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536398467433 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7893498827 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271663702253 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968634149619 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750547462424 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149240084126 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570290745061 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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