Developed nations help other country which is not financially stable to give the money but the problem of poverty does not solve. So rich countries should provide different help to these nations rather than financial aid. I completely agree to above statement and my position is justifying further.
The foremost argument to support my position is that, varies support also help the nation to become poverty free. Therefore, good medical support and better infrastructure help the nation a lot to develop a better lifestyle for the resident. Some times support the nations to their defense system is also necessary. For example, US generally help the different country with the basic requirement and also provide the good support. In addition developed countries have to help the undeveloped countries with their basis needs like cloth, shelter and food.
On the other hand. if the country always need a help from other than these country never become an independent country. Moreover, country's financial and economical growth can also decrease. Pakistan, for instance, always depend upon other country's help so these country is become dependent on some other country. At last, country's growth can be decided upon the country's development and the resources of the country.
Overall, If the rich countries help with money to poorer country, Money can not solve the problem of the poverty. besides the money developed countries also look for an other type of help like basic need and medicine. sometime this help led a country towards to the dependent. I completed agree with these statement and this essay discussed the my position
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23574144487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57103957062 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486692015209 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.64083759 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4705882353 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449336097413 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163983963882 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113382841723 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309007863621 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995870505219 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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