Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through Internet, and they can study as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, it is commonly argued that the schools' essential function might be exhaustively replaced by the great innovation of the Internet with unlimited knowledge resourses assisting pupils in all educational levels with homeschooling. From my perspective , this essay will explain the reason behind my argument against the idea encouraged schools' closure.
Personally, the forementioned view could futile due to numerous purposes. First and foremost, schools not only simply aid students to broaden their cognitive capacities by means of a range of teaching methods as well as precisely prepared lecture, but also offer comprehensively educational environment for children perfectly matured in term of personality, physical well-being together with social communication. For instance, there are several extracurricular activities and events held frequently by schools such as camping in the open or preparing group presentations with the aim of enhancing the connections among learner and supporting the improvement in plenty of basis and even advanced abilities, whereas, the information available on Internet would not offer.
Furthermore, the online scope might not always be wholly reliable. This is due to the fact that there are abundant of materials from vary writers deterred children from opting for the genuinely valuable informations. Moreover, if the deficiently selected knowledge are accidently gained by youngsters who might not completely aware whether what is true or false, the consequence could be more serious than people might think. A research conducted in Vietnam in 2015 seems to support this situation, which represents the rise in the juvenile delinquency rates had linked with the increase in the number of children who had access to the internet early. Hence, in this case, a teacher will play a vitally crucial role in their education.
In conclusion, in personal, it is clear to me that the fundamental function of schools is not deniable, especially for children, and I totally disagree with those who argue that Internet could use in place of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52795031056 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07618753821 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.3973354455 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102117126042 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332072705367 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289867763998 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643944856642 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238699424018 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.39 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.71 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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