Analyst always show their concern about the environment and for that they do distinct research and experiments and also suggest that people have to confide their usage of energy consumption on daily bases.But their are so many people who do not consider those things,this is because of lack of interest and casual attitude towards the nature.there are number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with these problems.
Firstly,one of the central cause that people not care about environment is lack of interest. Because there are number of people who do not want to know the aspects of nature.for instance,people are extremely busy in there work and other activities so,they do not have enough time to deemed the pros and cons that associated with nature.secondly,people do not have any concern about environment.they done things according to their own ease.for instance,despite of so many cautioning regarding energy expenditure. The use energies according to their lifestyle without any care for nature.
There are some effective solutions that can help to protect environment one of the most effective method is ,spread the awareness between public and organise various seminars that aid nation to understand importance of clean environment .in other words government ought to take precise steps towards the nature for illustration,they can make some new law for energy consumption that protect nature.
In conclusion, for solving a problem of environment, it is necessary to take some actions towards nature and spread awareness, that avail for entire nation or world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42338709677 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17635226473 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.086714095 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.166666667 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.8333333333 7.06120827912 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241808728733 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114458997406 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552431075578 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134305962772 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634120168406 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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