Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people think the development have a positive impact others think it is negative To what extend do you agree or disagree

Artificial intelligence, which just 50 years ago existed only on the pages of the sci fi, now becomes part of everyday reality. You can meet traces of AI everywhere, from auto tagging your photos in the phone gallery, to self driving taxi or targing advertisement. I strongly agree that even if evolving of computers may look scary and unpredicatble, it is in general a good thiung gor humanity due to lost of positive benefits.

On the one hand. People are using it to enhance clarity of old family photos, adding colours to classic black and white movies, predicting the weather. Nowadays, if you asking service desk for help, it is hard to distinguish if you have breathing person on the other end of the line or is it just a program. AI creates routes for us in navigators, remind us of car traffic, and in general makes out lifes a little bit more predicable. Even creative jobs, like musicians or artists, now can be replaced by AI. There are some albums and paintings avaialble in the the internet are created by computers themselves
on the other hand, it has some negative impact as well. Many scientists predict in the future soem jobs may become obsolete as they will be fully repaced by robots. Taxi drivers, cleaners, accountants, this list is endless. Robots in general are cheaper than humans, they dont need salary or sleep and theydont rtake vcacation days or retire. These people may have hard times on the market, if society and politicians dont prepare re-education programs for them. Luddites in the 19th century did not appear outof thin air, they were lead by fear of losing their jobs and income.
in conclusion, despite some negative effects, AI certainly have and will contnue to have positive effect on humanity.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, well, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81666666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6215580609 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663333333333 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0887851678 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218467240437 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566791307248 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571950538429 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123738328694 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032508038976 0.056905535591 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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