A common opinion of the modern society is a fact that gender should not be considered as an obstacle for employee when it is looking for a candidate. I agree with that at some extent although it should be noted not all jobs are equal and in some rare cases hiring women may be undesirable.
On the first hand, there obviously must be no restrictions from the law point of view related to gender or race, During years women have shown full capability to be equal as workers in any area, be it construction, medicine or science. Historically jobs, considered as "manly" by society, like IT for example, nowadays become more and more women oriented. Percentage of students in IT universities is almost equal for both genders in Scandinavia countries and even in Russia it now takes more than 20% which was unthinkable just 10 years ago,
On the other hand, some jobs just too unhealthy for women to take. Be it harsh environment, like working on gas producing stations deep in Siberia, or roads pavement with their toxic fumes can easily impact worker health. Which may go easier for men but influence women ability to bear a child.
In conclusion, countries like Russia still have a list of professions forbidden for women, which may sound sexist, but from the point of government, ability of nation to procreate cannot be endangered even at the cost of gender equality and sometimes discriminatory restrictions embedded to society
- Do you agree newspapers will die out in the future
- Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think that the purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people think the development have a positive impact others think it is negative To what extend do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, look, may, so, still, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88979591837 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8732084761 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616326530612 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1753995423 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.75 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.625 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12804702242 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059080273415 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549740071464 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801670337764 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283858740664 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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