People usually have diverse opinion on which kind of subject must prevail in schools. Should it we teach children to be law abide citizens and make them learn values of the society? Or perhaps it would be better to educate them as individuals and concentrate on developing them as individuals ?
I strongly agree that teach kids early labour skills, how law works, how to count money is more beneficial for their future, than raising their self-esteem or using individual approach
On one hand, every parent want to see personalized attention to their children especially if they are paying for it. If child has a musical talent or gift for painting, sport or similar traits and love doing that, developing it maybe even beneficial for his future, Besides that these traits may serve as a part of integration into society for special kids with issues like PSTD.
On other hand, main purpose of the school is to develop civil and skillful citizen country demands. Since school are generally are financed by government and budget resources are restricted, educating kids based on individual plans maybe not as effective as more general approach. Working skills, some medical first help , some basic law knowledge is certainly more beneficial on more scaled approach. Simply saying when you have millions kids and hundreds schools individual approach can lead to disaster, while teachers are busy with special needs kids, major group may feel abandoned and even lose interest in education.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that make kids as individuals is a parents task, School may only give basic skills to kids and prepare them for adult world outside that maybe harsh and cruel and require money to survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07446808511 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53216513008 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1940698439 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.1 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175334428644 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701513216381 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311872063347 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882193575053 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040793212131 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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