In recent years, technology has revolutionized life on Earth. Although some people claim that robots will soon replace human beings in all professions, I believe that artificial intelligence can be suitable for menial jobs only. In this essay, I will illustrate why I partially agree with the claim of eventual robot replacement for labor.
Artificial intelligence has become lucrative for several industries and businesses. This appears as its maintenance costs less than the salary paid to humans, although its productivity, effectiveness, and proficiency are higher than that of human workers in many working fields. Numerous courier companies, for instance, have succeeded to replace delivery men and women with drones, which saved time and effort in delivering their goods. If these companies continue to depend on men and women in these tasks, they will continue losing money on salaries and time that is ruined by traffic congestion. To conclude, robots are likely to substitute human labor because not only do they save time and effort, but also they cost less.
There are several interactive careers that are out of the abilities of robots These jobs require human interaction and emotional intelligence rather than programmed artificial processors. Teachers’ ability to interact with students in class and online, for illustration, cannot be replaced by artificially intelligent robots that could lack any sense of emotional understanding. Since teachers are responsible for developing their students’ knowledge, emotions, and skills, machines fail to do that job because they are not able to detect emotions and judge situations correctly, especially with young learners. Thus, there are fields where human expertise is necessary.
In recapitulation, in my view, it is inevitable that machines are overcoming jobs, which depend on physical strength. However, machinery is incapable of performing efficiently in certain areas that require human emotional interaction.
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- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology 80
- The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades Although some of these changes have been negative the overall effect of this technology has been positive what are your opinions on this 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68791946309 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04583582875 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627516778523 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0372513015 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149320667695 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489687116184 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440377173859 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846436886343 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045851010055 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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