It is undeniable that human being ought to work throughout his life span in order to spend the better lifestyle. However, a number of society insist that to choose job with huge wage (comparatively) than inner peace of mind towards work. I completely dissatisfied with this opinion and I personally believe that job is peace of mind is much more than huge salary.
To begin with, the society which are in favor of earning wage from the task (comparatively) than convince in the workplace have a valid reason. Because money is tenacity of today's life for paying expense it requires a huge wage and it would be only possible when a person gives priority to enormous wage (comparatively) than satisfying with inner peace of mind. For instance employees working in the companies offered a large amount of salary packages but there working condition are completely unreliable in terms of conflict and some employees are not satisfied with the career they are doing.
Despite this, the vast majority of people have given preference to Internal happiness, and they considered it as the biggest wealth because it keeps you motivated which leads to career growth. In other words, there is a direct proportional between productivity and job satisfaction. People who love their work can easily excel in their fields and achieve better results than those who gives priority to the biggest salary. For example, Jeff Bezos leave their high earning task and ventured to become an entrepreneur and after enduring years of ups and downs he became the most successful entrepreneur of the era. Overall the comfort ability factor while working is immensely an incredible in nature.
To sum up with, people who are against the pleasure in workplace have a flawed understanding of concept. This essay argued why inner involvement of employees in the workstation has immense benefits and as far as I concerned I would prefer the favorable workplace environment (quite) than tremendous wage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to job'
Suggestion: to job
...number of society insist that to choose job with huge wage comparatively than inner...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08950617284 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74226093698 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7116586052 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831928415089 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318774558802 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375487050802 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518942499457 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329998082254 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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