Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers not people

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Scientists predict, in the near future cars will be driven by computers, not people

It is assumed by some scientists that computers will undertake car functions rather than human drivers in the foreseen future. Although autonomous cars have some drawbacks in terms of unemployment and safety, I would argue that there are far more benefits.
There are numerous benefits of robotic cars, one of which is road safety improvement. In other words, an increment in computer-controlled automobiles will lead to a drop in human error. With the elimination of artificial error, traffic-related deaths such as drink driving or over-speed driving will remarkably reduce, as robocars will be well pre-programmed to assist human safety. In addition, the use of self-driving cars would effectively decrease the enormous carbon emission released by normal cars and traffic congestion, thereby benefiting both environment and people’s health. It also could better long-distance traveling by making them safer and more comfortable. To be more specific, cars that are fully capable of functioning without human intervention free up time normally spent on driving, but instead using them for relaxing, reading, or spreading time together.

Despite the above-mentioned merits, having no human presence in the driving seat raise some concerns. First and foremost, cars that drive themselves means they are without human involvement, which might lead to job loss in the transportation industry. For instance, it appears that a big amount of Vietnamese rely on driving as a source of income such as delivery, and all kinds of drivers, so an alternative method of transportation would contribute to major unemployment rates. It is also noted that driverless vehicles are vulnerable to cyberattacks, as with other technology. There are potential risks that self-driving cars will be hacked and malfunctioned, which could turn a convenient riding experience into a terrifying scenario
In conclusion, I believe while having certain drawbacks, the advent of self-driving cars would be a positive development in the field of technology and transportation. However, as with any other technology that is related to human life, automated cars should be carefully planned and well-prepared in terms of safety.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57910447761 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30035607009 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602985074627 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1169727198 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197206465978 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634043784933 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611014329281 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126761628811 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393830424321 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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