Shops in the countryside are fewer and fewer, so people tend to go to the stores in the towns and cities, and the lead to their inconvenient life. Car use also causes pollution. Is this phenomenon more harmful than the end?
Today , there are different concerns in human life. One of them is about social topics which are untoward life in rural areas and pollution caused by car. Some people worried about the problem that in the countryside there less stores than in the cities so citizens have tendency to shop in town as well as advanced areas which result in unfortunate life and lead to car pollution. My essay will explain some cause for the problem given and then take some solution to deal with the problem above.
On the one hand there are some reason why people choose shopping town and cities which lead to their inconvenient life and car pollution. Firstly, many shops in rural areas are quite far from the accommodation of residents that scale up their tendancy to go shopping in town. Secondly, the price in the countryside is quite more expensive than the one in the city. Finally, when shopping in modern and advanced areas people have more and more options such as colours ,shapes ,materials as well as functions. For instance my mother usually purchased clothes in the city centre because of the updated products and goods. This phenomenon is a factor that caused pollution by car.
In general, there are some solutions we should take to deal with a harmful effects on benefits to humanity which called Car pollution. To begin with, the government should put into effect some laws to cut down the amount of cars which are using by people in daily life. What is more, residents and citizens should be assisted to raise their awareness of pollution by car. To end up with , people choose public transportations like bus, train and many more instead of using their own cars.
To sum up my essay explain some sources an measures of the trend given. The above solutions
maybe very good steps to the problem. However people should take much more time to think about the problem carefully.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Today , there are different concerns in human l...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich are untoward life in rural areas and pollution caused by car. Some people wo...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun stores is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e problem that in the countryside there less stores than in the cities so citizens h...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...there are some reason why people choose shopping town and cities which lead to their inc...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dancy to go shopping in town. Secondly, the price in the countryside is quite mo...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sive than the one in the city. Finally, when shopping in modern and advanced are...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve more and more options such as colours ,shapes ,materials as well as functions. ...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and more options such as colours ,shapes ,materials as well as functions. For inst...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s we should take to deal with a harmful effects on benefits to humanity which called Ca...
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Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ness of pollution by car. To end up with , people choose public transportations li...
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Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...To sum up my essay explain some sources an measures of the trend given. The above ...
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Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an measure' or simply 'measures'?
Suggestion: an measure; measures
...To sum up my essay explain some sources an measures of the trend given. The above solutions...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... maybe very good steps to the problem. However people should take much more time to th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in general, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78220858896 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38611631855 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518404907975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4786391851 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7058823529 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337667241747 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106057486889 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842188066318 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153512037054 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119250380432 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Today , there are different concerns in human l...
^^
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ich are untoward life in rural areas and pollution caused by car. Some people wo...
^^
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun stores is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e problem that in the countryside there less stores than in the cities so citizens h...
^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to shop'.
Suggestion: to shop
...there are some reason why people choose shopping town and cities which lead to their inc...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dancy to go shopping in town. Secondly, the price in the countryside is quite mo...
^^
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sive than the one in the city. Finally, when shopping in modern and advanced are...
^^
Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ve more and more options such as colours ,shapes ,materials as well as functions. ...
^^
Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and more options such as colours ,shapes ,materials as well as functions. For inst...
^^
Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s we should take to deal with a harmful effects on benefits to humanity which called Ca...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ness of pollution by car. To end up with , people choose public transportations li...
^^
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...To sum up my essay explain some sources an measures of the trend given. The above ...
^^
Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an measure' or simply 'measures'?
Suggestion: an measure; measures
...To sum up my essay explain some sources an measures of the trend given. The above solutions...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... maybe very good steps to the problem. However people should take much more time to th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in general, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78220858896 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38611631855 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518404907975 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4786391851 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7058823529 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1764705882 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337667241747 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106057486889 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842188066318 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153512037054 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119250380432 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.