Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Gives reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Is animal testing ever justified? Ever since the beginning, it was one of the most controversial topics worldwide. As time goes, supporters and opponents grow; each side has a different perspective passed on specific reasons and moral beliefs. It is acceptable as long as there are strict regulations to prevent the mistreatment of animals. This essay will discuss whether animals should be used or not in testing and confirming new drugs and procedures.
Animals are biologically similar to humans, they suffer from many of the same health problems such as; cancer, heart disease, and diabetes. Supporters believe that it ensured several diseases' cures not only for humans but also for their species. To clarify, animal experimentation helps understanding the biological function of different mammals, reptiles, and insects; and how it is affected by the disease. Not to mention that it had a huge impact on veterinary medicine, as they were able to save more animal lives. For example, psychoactive drugs, surgical procedures, pain relievers, and organs transplant, all these cures were developed and tested in animals before humans, so they work for both.
On the other hand, morals stand for animals' rights, some suspect that experiments on animals are unethical, as humans don't have the right to imprison or harm animals under any conditions. To enhance, animals are forced to be subjects for painful experiments mostly without painkillers; and for all that pain, the testing isn't even working. Furthermore, with the fast development of technology, a new way will be invented, and scientists will replace animals with programs and computers.
To summarize, animals are souls just like humans, and they were the cause for the appearance of the right treatments and vaccines. In my opinion, even though some experiments didn't have a high success rate, they were a turning point in the medical field such as; cancer treatments with 7% in animals, yet worked successfully in humans. Inventing new models by using new technology will be great as it will save many resources, just until that day nothing can replace animal research and its effectiveness. Finally, ask yourself how life will be if we stopped testing on animals then, state your opinion too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28099173554 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84327149459 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617079889807 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3382327401 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.764705882 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228144160305 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717000691154 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569063534803 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139383163343 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029777697027 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.