Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
If you go out at any time in a day ,can you find any one doesn’t use the mobile?
When the human invented the satellite and after many years, now all of us have internet at home ,at work and even in the streets .After the globalization we use the internet in all things for education ,work ,practicing on something everything now is online ,but another people saw the internet get worsened in this present time and in the future.
When we invent the internet the world became a small world we can communicate with any person around the world in a second, we can learn any new skill via internet in our place , while the period of the corona virus we stayed at home and do our things online ,the work, Education until the final exams ,So the internet is playing a main role in our life, most people can’t live without it.
In addition, the internet make everything easier and faster like, banks ,hospitals ,any governmental Establishment or factories ,prefer to the technology all these places can work now in a fantastic way, can do things better and with a high quality compared with the past .In order to , some places do training course for their employees to improve their skills on the internet and deal with the technology .For example , Some schools in vacations do these placements for the teachers to communicate with the internet ,especially the old teachers because they don’t have the experience about it.
On the other hand, some people think that ,when the internet attacked our life , it make our life hazard . Some people said ‘ our kids now don’t treat with us , All the time we are arguing with each other because of the internet, Another people said it takes all the time we still online for many and many hours and it make our bodies are unhealthy . people now like put in a pantry by the internet and we can’t live without it like the past, instead of this we can speak to each other face to face that will improve our mental and mode .
To conclude , there are some people prospect that the future will be great with the internet and we can do many goals also our country will be improved with this technology .But another said it’s very harmful to them and to their relatives.
Personally, we can’t live without technology and internet but with a limit we can gain abundant goals with the internet , but limit you time don’t leave yourself without control , write in your dairy the time you can stand on the internet and period of the time with your family and friends , when you go outing I suggest don’t use your phone , just enjoy if our day is limited we can benefit from everything we have now, it’s up to you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 477.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56813417191 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32871809086 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459119496855 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 683.1 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.428643448 49.4020404114 319% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.111111111 106.682146367 227% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.7667163134 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10325591932 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623740068531 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317874543328 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591765270547 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359263318373 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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