Should Gay Marriage Be Legal?
The hot debate about gay marriage has sparked strong interest in whether or not gay marriage be legal? Undoubtedly, for some people the concept of same-sex marriage is complex and controversial, raising social, religious, moral and political questions, these contrast to those who opines that they too should have access to the same benefits enjoyed by heterosexual married couples.
The current trends and consensus over gay marriage has changed in recent years. The acceptance of gay marriage is as natural as heterosexual marriage. Proponents of legal gay marriage contend that gay marriage bans are discriminatory and unconstitutional. Its acceptance will not only benefit those who belong to this community but also the whole society. A number of countries allow same-sex marriage with number being growing up.
On the other hand, there are many reasons which contend legalization of gay marriage. Marriage has traditionally been defined as being between one man and one woman, and that marriage is primarily for procreation. Its opponents contend that homosexuality is a reversible and unfortunate lifestyle choice. There are many reasons such as poor child-parent relationships, sexual abuse, etc.. cause people to make such choices.
In my view, the gay people also have the right to enjoy same legal rights and protections as other human beings. I believe giving same-sex couples equal benefits as heterosexual couples would entitled them to other benefits too, for example, many companies offer health insurance benefits for married spouses. Not having benefits such as medical claims, inherit partner’s property, family discounts annoy gay and lesbian couples. Such unfair treatment not only frustrate them but is also not good for peace of society. The French president and his gay lady made a good example in support of gay marriage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...marriage has sparked strong interest in whether or not gay marriage be legal? Undoubtedly, for...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...-parent relationships, sexual abuse, etc.. cause people to make such choices. I...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cause
...rent relationships, sexual abuse, etc.. cause people to make such choices. In my v...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'entitle'
Suggestion: entitle
... benefits as heterosexual couples would entitled them to other benefits too, for example...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46180555556 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90722471375 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6914161304 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5294117647 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419422077535 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134177605398 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145238485495 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271361256014 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118532555292 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.