Should Men and Women be segregated in professional Sports?
Up until today, it is normal to strictly segregate men and women in sporting events. However, some object to this, saying that the 2 sexes need allowance to compete with one another in the same game. Another party, on the contrary, uses physiological factors to defend the idea. Personally, I mainly agree with the latter and I will explain my opinion later.
Gender equality has always been a hot topic in a variety of fields. While women have been proven to be equal to men in terms of things like intelligence and certain skills, and nowadays be allowed to do the same jobs as men and get equal pay, there are some aspects that need clear boundaries between the 2 genders. And that is related to sports. Naturally, men in general often exceed women in terms of physical attributes: they have more explosive muscle mass and bigger frames, so, in terms of sports that rely on stamina, speed, size, and strength, women can hardly defeat their counterparts. And even though there is some exception about some women who have already been on the same par or even surpassed men in such sports, the majority of females still experience such obvious biological differences.
Some obstinate individuals may say that segregated sports emphasize women’s weaknesses, deny gender equality, or something like that. I’m strongly opposed to this. Because no one is perfect, people have their own specialties. Studies have shown that women tend to be more attentive, flexible, and organized. So it is normal for men to exceed women in some aspects and vice versa.
So do we have to accept that people of both genders cannot compete nor collaborate with each other in sports? The answer is, not really. There are some particular sports that mainly rely on skills, for example, horse racing, motorbike racing, sailing, or darts. And since the ability to perform such games in both genders is similar, they can totally do it together.
Given all these points, there should be a necessary separation for men and women in the Olympics or other sporting events since gender-related difference is a normal fact that we need to accept. People just can't cite gender equality as a reason for any unreasonable idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, still, while, for example, in general, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90860215054 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57116875673 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6128798332 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304786112685 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076799019081 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096293858186 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165178746617 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638797902109 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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