Should museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge, even a voluntary charge, be levied for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Until now, many historical galleries and artefacts have been preserved in many museums to recall the most remarkable events. It is argued that museums should be free of charge for tourists, the others think that tourists need to pay a charge. In my opinion, I will discuss the two issues above.
To begin with, several museums don’t take money from tourists because a museum is a site displaying historical events, timelines, and historical figures artefacts. This site also illustrates the galleries about the gallantry of historical heroes. Thus, many schools allow students to visit museums to learn more knowledge about history, the art of these pictures, and the meaning of those. Moreover, the art classes need to look at some pictures to feel an artist’s tone and try to draw, along with discovering the origin of pictures. Secondly, people do not need to pay a fee so they can visit museums freely and comfortably, as well as tourist sites for them to look at. Consequently, more and more tourists will go to see exhibitions without money.
On the other hand, to build a monumental museum, the government must have spent a lot of cost on developing that museum and putting on view exhibiting paintings. Therefore, if museums charge a fee, the majority of richer tend to visit museums and are able to pay a tax. Furthermore, although museums show many precious historical and artistic artefacts, not many people go to see them because of the demand of cost.
In conclusion, some arguments say that museums should not pay a charge, yet others argue museums ought to charge. Personally, I agree with two statements. Museums need to balance the fee that how it becomes cheap to attract more visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95138888889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70821759012 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3888872379 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185270436877 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638974202468 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742907008611 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12610326678 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783033986671 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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