Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is argued that the lack of most species of plants and animals is the most severe problem in the environment. Otherwise, most people believe that environmental problems also play a more important role in other things. To make it clearer, I will my own opinion.
To begin with, the decreasing of animal and plant species has a huge impact on the environment, especially on human life. Firstly, people live in a clean environment due to the natural habitat of species. As we know, trees are the most important species, which make a pristine environment, and it is compared to a sunshade and provides some clean water. If it is logged illegally, it will not protect from flooding and the rising of sea levels. Besides, people need clean water to maintain their daily life so the trees are crucial and helpful for their lives. Secondly, will the animal species become extinct, humans will not see them and do research about them. Not only so, but people also will be more hungry because of the loss of food. Instead of that, they have to spend a lot of time using their labors to get food, maintain their lives.
On the other hand, currently, we can see many precious things made from ivory and animal fur, these things are the consequence of deforestation. Therefore, they lead to endangered species and the loss of the natural environment. Furthermore, global warming is increasing seriously because of the decrease of species and natural habitats.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the first idea because the disappearance of species is the main reason resulting in environmental pollution, it also affects the rise of global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90322580645 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73213278053 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566308243728 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6797994188 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275037354429 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878331538914 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706117828534 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165384771806 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873489399961 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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