Sime people say that leisure time is important for having a good life while other belive that money is important Do you agree or disagree

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...people prefer to live happy camper life, therefore human wants to take a rest for...
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...i do more activities in leisure time is the the best while i strongly agragree that sit...
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...i do more activities in leisure time is the the best while i strongly agragree that sit...
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...ople as busy as a bee. On the other hand men and women both categories are today ...
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...h categories are today so busy to work. and not their body , all people brain want...
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...oday so busy to work. and not their body , all people brain want to take a chill ...
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...ay so busy to work. and not their body , all people brain want to take a chill ou...
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...in want to take a chill out. Furthermore , leisure time is obviously most importa...
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... want to take a chill out. Furthermore , leisure time is obviously most important...
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...o reduce their brain struggles. Moreover , but some people wants to money and dep...
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...reduce their brain struggles. Moreover , but some people wants to money and depri...
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...ney and deprive their best time. However , its not perfect because one day youll ...
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...y and deprive their best time. However , its not perfect because one day youll be...
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...ever , its not perfect because one day youll be a perfect ten but didnt rest , youl...
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...t because one day youll be a perfect ten but didnt rest , youll face various type...
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...use one day youll be a perfect ten but didnt rest , youll face various type of disea...
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...y youll be a perfect ten but didnt rest , youll face various type of diseases. Fo...
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...oull be a perfect ten but didnt rest , youll face various type of diseases. For inst...
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...iseases. For instance cholestarol, sugar , peasure etc.. In addition , a larg...
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...eases. For instance cholestarol, sugar , peasure etc.. In addition , a large ...
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...stance cholestarol, sugar , peasure etc.. In addition , a large proportion ca...
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...l, sugar , peasure etc.. In addition , a large proportion cant go back their ...
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... sugar , peasure etc.. In addition , a large proportion cant go back their ad...
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..... In addition , a large proportion cant go back their adolescents age. At the p...
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...k their adolescents age. At the present most of people addicted to save money and dont spend l...
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...st of people addicted to save money and dont spend leisure time on the other hand th...
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...f people day by day grow up. As a reault , conversely , one day they think back ...
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...people day by day grow up. As a reault , conversely , one day they think back an...
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...y day grow up. As a reault , conversely , one day they think back and worry why ...
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...day grow up. As a reault , conversely , one day they think back and worry why we...
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...nt spend leisure time. In conclusion , humans brain want to take a rest menta...
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... spend leisure time. In conclusion , humans brain want to take a rest mentall...
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...est people kill two birds with one stone , live life happily and save currency. O...
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...t people kill two birds with one stone , live life happily and save currency. On ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63559322034 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35874350742 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1191609179 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224719887112 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721374474629 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557979412344 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135538790523 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383297274362 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.