Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in pubic places. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that smoking should not be allowed in public places because of its drawbacks for human’s health, while others have contrast viewpoint. Personally, I strongly agree that a ban is the most appropriate course of action.
There are three main reasons why governments should prevent smoking in pubic places. Firstly, smoking brings bad effect to people’s health. It not only harms the smoker but also surrounding people. Smoke is the main reason of lung cancer and many dangerous diseases, which many make people die every year. In a cigarette, there are thousands of toxic chemicals that destroy our body. If we want to protect our body, we should not try smoking even once.
Secondly, smoking wastes a lot of time and money. Everyday, people have to spend their money to buy cigarette and treating diseases which related to smoking. It costs a huge amount of money that not all families can afford. Moreover, smoking can make people become addicted to it and then they do not have time and mind to work or study.
Last but not least, smoking can pollutes the air. As smokers smoke in open air, they may breath out smoke that can contaminate the air. If non-smokers breath in this air, their health will be harmful just because of other people’s lack of environmetal consciousness.
In conclusion, smoking do not bring benefits for people as well as the environment. Therefore, governments should take action to prevent smoking in public places by reduce the number of cigarettes, fine smokers who smoke in open places. The ban will improve the health of thousands people, and that is the most possitive development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: PUBIC_X[1]
Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...y governments should prevent smoking in pubic places. Firstly, smoking brings bad eff...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...smoking wastes a lot of time and money. Everyday, people have to spend their money to bu...
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Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'pollute'
Suggestion: pollute
...study. Last but not least, smoking can pollutes the air. As smokers smoke in open air, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58242246449 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5538438503 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8888888889 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310968108895 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960235814073 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649099431393 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170579585063 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569092640715 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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