Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solutions.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
Nowadays, there is a dramatic increase in smoking tobacco among youth people. Also they encounter potentially major health problem. I believe exploring the causes of the problem can assist in finding suitable solutions to help resolve it.
These days, attracting attention among young people could partly accounts for being willing to smoke tobacco. Teenagers and youngsters believe that if they turn to smoking, they will portray their authority by breaking family rules such as banning the use of cigarettes. Therefore, most young people no not consider the consequences of using drug and its effect on health. In my opinion, teachers and parents play a vital role in teaching and upbringing teenagers with ethical factors. I, personally, know of a few friends who their children have run into asthma problem as smoking tobacco. One of their desired teachers have given some effective advices to deter students from smoking. As a result, students attitude who were smokers have been changed through role modelling.
Being oblivious to harmful effects of smoking can explain why adolescents are eager to be cigarette smokers more and more. Most juvenile people do not fully realized the adverse consequences of consuming tobacco and they do not know that drugs has been linked to health issues. From a social standpoint, they should be informed by authorities. Consequently, the government should allocate a budget for making the high quality TV shows for young audiences. Also the government could put up the tax on tobacco to discourage them from smoking.
In conclusion, even though attracting attention and being unawareness in young population contribute to health problems, teachers and the government can remedy the situation. In my perspective, giving practical advices by popular persons and climbing tax are steps in the right direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'account'
Suggestion: account
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39175257732 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76554384877 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625429553265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0882213813 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2941176471 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233352434508 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678098377989 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482378935707 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129009893558 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434805602521 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.