Society is experiencing problems like crime and drug abuse in the field of urbanization give suggestions related to this trend (545801)
It is an undeniable truth to say that in today's time crime and drug abuse are increasing trend. The predominant reason behind this situation is increasing needs and stressful life. People who lived in cities more suffered from this phenomenon. This essay intends to suggest some solutions to mitigate the problems.
To commence with, people are living in metropolitan obtained more stressful life which encourages people to take drugs. Moreover, excessive use of drugs creates a dreadful situation and it is also very hazardous for their health. Governments should keep an eye on this activity and make an effort to control this situation. Furthermore, the police force should be strict against the drug seller and they must be arrested, therefore people can not purchase prohibited products that have a detrimental effect on their health.
Additionally, new rehabilitation centers should be built therefore, people can acquire great treatment to avoid the usage of the drugs. Besides, more cameras should be installed in the entire city so that cops can easily catch criminals. Help-line numbers of police headquarter should be highly active so that numerous people can take benefit in any dangerous conditions. Moreover, thieves and offenders should be highly punished so that people assume twice before committing a crime.
Every house must have a security alarm it would be beneficial for people in emergency times.
To close the discussion, it is the accountability of the government to protect their citizens and drugs should be banned, people who are associated with a crime should be highly punishable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3731884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84682792184 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5367523278 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.928571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228052725975 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789577787489 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167264880024 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191355883935 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.286537616232 0.056905535591 504% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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