Today more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities To what extent do you agree or disagree (649088)
It is an undeniable fact that nowadays pupils delivered their plenty of time on other activities such as sports, social gathering and watching movies rather than paying more attention on their academic. This essay agree with the given notion and reason behind this phenomenon will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.
Spending a time on other activities than studying actively is necessary? Certainly not. To embark with, spending time with peers and watching movies on Netflix is quite normal in this contemporary era. Pupils use to spend their time on the study and less active on social media, as technology was not so developed in earlier time. In addition to this, students are spending plethora of time on watching movies as it no benefits at all and it is a waste of time. To epitome, students in this digital era spending their much time on games such as pub g and free fire which is absolutely useless for them.
Further and even more importantly, if students use their time in study they get tremendous success at the end. They not only enhance their academic score significantly in the exam but also get chance to work with multinational corporations in the future with lucrative remuneration. Thus, it is an essential duty of the novice to study hard until their exam comes.
Nevertheless, we can not ignore flip side too that other activities such as gymnastics, social gathering and sports are also crucial for their marvelous advancement. One can get employment in army and police for because of their physical fitness, also get chance to serve the nation.
To recapitulate, student should spend their vast majority of time in their academic however, they must also have freedom to do extraordinary physical activity which is quite beneficial for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
Today more and more full time university students focus on other acti...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...normal in this contemporary era. Pupils use to spend their time on the study and le...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02352941176 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72438685524 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526470588235 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.1023257957 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.384615385 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.493257965483 0.244688304435 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154513411793 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196666675369 0.0667982634062 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290679979517 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.314563195221 0.056905535591 553% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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