Society today has more problems with the behaviour of teenager than in the past. what do you think are the cause of this? what solution can you suggest?
teenager's behaviour bring some negative impact for cilization more than in the past. I believe that it has a number of reason and needs have activities should be done.
First of all, youth areeffected by around environment. from their family, because of big workload, their parents cannot balance between wwork and family, so they spend lack of care for children. parents pamered children by giving money in orrder to their kids thake care of self. After teenagers save money, they buy stories, CDs which not suitable for your age, especially man tennagers. young person also will become corrupt, if they grow up in bad family atmosphere. For example, father drinks wine. fights wife, absolutely, children living in this family has bad affects from dad. Despite they influence from their house, they can ''lean'' from bad friends at school. Using acohol, fighting another, dropping out are some of behaviours of teenagers nowadays. they think that these are best ways proveding theirselves. youth not only being draggedbut also curious woth addictive substance. Consequently, family and school play a significant role in educating and personality of young person.
Secondly, technology bring some drawback which affect adolescent with the invention of internet, social networking is small social, they can make new friends and study worst sourse of information. because it has not close control, adsolescent approaching sourse of information not exactly. From this, it lead to bad behaviour of youth. Moreover, you adults play violent game consist of aggresive, war. this is another reason which make teenager become worse more than in the past.
Depending on these cause above, should have some solution. Firstly, family and school should take care more about children, try to understand individual of teenagers. they aslo aducate youth by another way. school have method to manage and close control for bad students. Teacher may interact with student in thier class. Finally, gorvenment shouls manage to limit violent website.
To summarize, family and school are factor wich have a deal of influence to teenagers, so understanding view and bieng friend with children, youth may change and behave in a more appropriate manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33238636364 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60966688438 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9193158151 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1923076923 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133721328055 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358636859098 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509392703924 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854305730143 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525562928168 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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