The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising has been around since as early as the first civilisations and constantly evolved to adapt to the demands of society. However, many people share an opposing viewpoint towards the industry, claiming how the adverts are now pointless and even fraudulent. In this essay, I will examine the issue from both approaches and consider practical solutions.
First and foremost, the PR activity is used to public and educate information, and hence, adopted mostly by businesses. Through a variety of platform, physically or digitally, it reaches out to a large mass of target customers, who can generate and boost up sales of one's company. Furthermore, in numerous cases, consumers also enjoy the benefits along with the enterprises - most significantly, countless entertaining and sporting events were made happened thanks to sponsorships.
On the other hand, promoting action frequently causes unpleasant feelings to the audience. Being a regular user of social media, any person will find adverts exceedingly disturbing and distracted as they take up precious space on the screen, time-consuming to watch and then close them, and so forth. Not to mention, due to the brief and attention-grabbing nature of the post, strong and sophisticated phrases are adopted. As a result, it leads to exaggeration, and misleading facts. Dangers arise from this affair is unpredictable, and should definitely be handled by a competent authority.
To conclude, advertising serves a positive purpose by its nature, and it is an essential process of commercial advancement of a country. Having said that, a lack of law-enforcement and supervision from a government could easily provoke threats to the community. Publicity shall be restrained with rational regulations, allowing publishers to maintain creativity within boundaries.
- TOPIC With a growing world population one of the most pressing issue is that of feeding such a large number of people Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... who can generate and boost up sales of ones company. Furthermore, in numerous cases...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58844765343 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2955844347 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714801444043 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5221907954 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102674554895 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027038646681 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189394661187 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527140145409 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118442533614 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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