It is an undeniable fact that some adverts are incompatible and serves no useful purpose to the community. Some people consider that all form of advertisement should be banned because of its usefulness. In my opinion, though some adverts are incompatible, outright banning is not a sensible solution. In this essay, we will discuss the pros and cons of banning advertisement as a viable solution.
There is no denying fact that publicity sometimes exerts appalling impact upon the community. Nowadays, manufacturers are step-by-step commercializing commodities by inviting celebrities to publicize their brand names. Furthermore, people are bombarded with so many adverts and broadcasting propaganda and leaflets containing sexual and violent images that do harm to adolescents and adults. Additionally, advertisement causes the purchase of unnecessary goods. For example, commercial in television and colorful images in advertising brochures persuade buyers to spend a good deal of money in buying items not essentials to have. Moreover, advertisement specifically targets adolescents which in turn pressurize their parents to buy unnecessary and even harmful products for them.
Turning to the other side of the argument, advertisements can bring many benefits. To begin with, the advertisement of goods promote people's awareness of the latest products available in the market as well as competition among the manufacturers. As a consequence of this, prices remain stable while ensuring the quality of the product. Moreover, an outright banning on the advertisement will decline the marketing industry. As a consequence of this unemployment will increase in society with appalling impact upon the economy. Instead of, the government should construct strict rules and regulation for the marketing industry. Moreover, advertisements are an important part of today's businesses. It aware buyers about the product choices as well as companies to reach prospective buyers and fulfill their demands.
To conclude, In my opinion, while some adverts are not compatible and are not serving any useful purpose, the advertisements should be banned due to some reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt will decline the marketing industry. As a consequence of this unemployment will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69349845201 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28467068768 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9694729952 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7894736842 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18837491495 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547007409368 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566389937966 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124144287141 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568108839391 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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