Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Censoring all the items of advertisement as evolved as a heated topic of controversy as concerned to the advantage of people in the nation. In my opinion, I firmly disagree with the topic of broadcasting various products publicity and announcement to be totally banned, because ruling out products and education regarding health and wealth of the people would be applicable by the help of such advertisement faculty as well.
To begin with, its a fallacy of some people to complete removal of advertisement would help the society to reach higher level of thinking and which may improve their capability of assessing the product or learning knowledge by the practical experience. Every community there will be a people in various standard of living and education status, such people would get information by the virtue of public announcement or notice given for public. For instance, some agricultural loan or qualitative products and also health awareness programs of central government policy might not reach to the common people those who are failure to access news all the time, consequently, people are seems to continue their work without the help of government. furthermore, society would aware about leading companies products and the benefits as well as drawback by the help of advertisement.
With regards to the national economy also get benefit from the advertisement by different kinds of products broadcasting through the television channels, radio, news paper and so on. in addition, many people getting job in the field of advertisement and marketing with the help of multinational companies, which would be the other positive impact of advertisement. For instance, every nations economy level would be stabilized by the growth of advertisement in nowadays such as, during the period of world cup competencies an amazing contributions are done by the advertisement agencies.
In conclusion, advertisement has the many advantageous effect on the society in the name of health and wellness, education and balancing of nations financial crisis. So that banning of add would not make any positive effect in the society as much.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33628318584 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10642579547 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522123893805 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3150328787 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.454545455 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.4545454545 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141596484025 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647852197519 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463875369681 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886472909187 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228925744467 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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