People only work hard for money and there are no other reasons for doing that. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this contemporary life, people are become more talents but also they just want work hard because want to earn more money, some people believed that is the best reason and no other reason for doing that. Personally, this agreement have some potentially but other people can doing that for their hobbies and professional.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of people work hard for earn money and no other reason for that. First, government subsidies for job are believed to equalize working opportunities among people regardless of their background family, people work hard can earn more money and they can take care for their family, living conditions. This financial support, presumably tends not only to increase the overall working hard rate of lower-income but also to mitigate their feeling of inferiority, which promotes an egalitarian society. Second, people work hard for earn money would probably result in a higher supply of highly qualified workers, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that people work hard for earn more money is the main reason that they can payment for their life including accommodation, food, other things.. and imperative to foster economic growth and technological development in any nations.
Nevertheless, another reason can exist that people work hard because they have geniuses passion for their employment. Example, people working as ballerinas or artist, stage actors, singers, they want to work hard because they want to performance. As I see in my country, some famous people they always work hard because they scared that sometimes other people don’t know about them. Especially, they work hard that they want to spread their emotions, bring energy for everyone. Thus, in this case, job is not a paycheck, it is also a further manifestation of personal identity, pride, recognition, desire and other ways.
In conclusion, I agree that money is the best thing that people need for live. However, it’s not only thing for job, people can work hard and can do many for their passion and dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: do
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Suggestion: And
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1592920354 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63693055888 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492625368732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.90778215 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446395012261 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190366078874 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113165720991 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329367647824 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738587757694 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.