Solving environment problems should be the responsibility of an international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely claimed that worldwide co-operation should take up most of the burden to overcome environment issues. While I agree with the importance of international organization's role, I also believe that of administration in each country is undeniable.
On the one hand, international associations express quality of worldwide collaboration by standing at the role of leading and connecting among nations. These, along with firm procedures and manners, are definitely have capacity to set up plans, develop strategies as well as spread them in large-scale for many countries to adopt. Significant organizations such as UN, ASEAN, EU,... are the most suitable places for each members to broaden their influence. Moreover, union among nations all over the world are considered to be indispensable due to marvelous efficience that corporation can bring. There are over 200 countries around the globe, and they all have their own strength at a certain aspect, which can be listed as finance, economy, society, education,... Hence, governments of every countries are capable of contributing in order to improve the serious and urgent situation nowadays by utilizing their specific achievements. For example, nations which possessed advanced technology can concentrate on innovation and invention with regard to hi-tech products or systems to deal with contaminated sources, shortage of permanent materials, greenhouse effect,... while expenditure for these experiments is able to be run by subsidies stemming from rich countries.
On the other hand, it cannot be declined that domestic governments are also play important role. If nations focused on their environmental problems that they are facing up with, the entire state will be better gradually. Because global environmental state is frankly an overall perspective composed by features of each country, only by accomplishing exclusive duties do administrations successfully prove their value in front of international community. Besides, dealing with environmental issues also lead to improvement in other related categories. When the quality of essential supply for daily basis like atmosphere, water and soil are upgraded, life of citizens, as a result, will have chances to experience higher standards. There is evidence proof indicating that the cleaner and fresher habitat is, the less likely dwellers get chronic diseases.
In conclusion, both international and national factors are initial for solving environmental problems. Hence, no matter how large the scale is, governments and organizations had better join hands to make marvelous impact on the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, frankly, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2241.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71683673469 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22553808683 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 176.041082164 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637755102041 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2636267706 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.947368421 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6315789474 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190270404919 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526022768994 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435272296357 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121616106051 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282944226948 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.