Some believe it is the responsibility of government to take care of the environment, others think people are responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Environmental issues are increasing day by day. Some social community argues that it is the government duty to tackle this problem, whereas others think, it is the responsibility of society. But I believe that the bend of both equally important for this phenomenon. This essay will discuss both viewpoints with my opinion in the last.
Firstly, the government needs to carry out strict laws against some industries. This means, according to the law the company should be banned that has more carbon dioxide emission from a set value during manufacturing products. For instance, in 2025, Netherland is going to shut down factories that released more than 0.5 % carbon in the air. Moreover, there is no much land to planting in big cities so, the vertical forest should be<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> constructed</span> in the cities as like the Singapore government did and Netherland grew plants vertically around the poles of the flyover.
But the goal of the government will only make it when citizens will understand their responsibilities. People should follow the law of authorities. Furthermore, locals should know to aware of how to manage domestic waste such as kitchen waste. They can decompose it to make Organic fertilizer. Instead of that, they need to adopt a carpooling system that will cut air pollution as well as the use up of natural resources such as oil. Last but not least, society should focus on throwaway culture. This means to say instead of buying new products people may use the old product.
In my opinion, from the above discussion, it is clear that both bodies are vital to fighting against environmental problems. Issues related to the environment may continue increasing in the upcoming year. So, both the government and citizens need to work together to tackle these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...% carbon in the air. Moreover, there is no much land to planting in big cities so,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22635135135 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10931048217 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9662424522 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099710684532 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292529764195 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242404410069 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571066705948 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291940027498 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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