Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
Write at least 250 words
In today's hectic world, people are now becoming a victim of depression, anxiety, perplexing and so on, which are direct outcome of stress, thereby people have both mental and physical disorder. But, now I will highlight some possible causes and solution of this grave problem.
To begin with, stress has now become a common sight with most of the people, and it transpires on account of manifold causes. Firstly, today's people are very impatient which is the major reason of stress in them because they want to acquire success in a short span, due to which they toil round the clock, and thereby neglect family and other joys. On the top of that, everyone wants to prove himself/herself superior than others by flaunting materialistic things, and when they do not achieve those things, then inferiority complex develops in their mind and thus again stress surmounts them. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that because of an intense work, people do not have a time for relaxation as well as for their families, which ultimately leads a very high stress level.
On the contrary, stress is mere a result of demotivation and pressure, which people often take when they get failure, but it can be overcome with right initiatives. Firstly, people should decide their priorities, whereby they can be able to maintain balance in their life. Furthermore, government should arrange free therapies and educational classes, where people can get to know about various ways of living happy without money or other incentives. In addition, people should engross themselves in doing physical exercises such as walking, running and so on, which can prove milestone in reducing their stress.
In conclusion, I opine that people should be practical and realistic in their life, which can help them in avoiding stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...wants to prove himself/herself superior than others by flaunting materialistic thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, well, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13175675676 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57835350079 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618243243243 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5925886265 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.090909091 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6363636364 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163342677414 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712815174109 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407834189594 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109983459445 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341991653878 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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