SOME BELIEVE THAT THROUGH MIGRATION DEVELOPED COUNTRIES ARE STEALING FROM DEVELOPING NATIONS WHILE OTHERS SAY THAT MIGRATION IS NOTHING BUT A NATURAL PROCESS.
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE. GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE ISSUE AS SOME BELIEVE THAT DEVELOPED COUNTRIES ARE STEALING EXPERTS FROM DEVELOPING WORLD, WHILE OTHERS POSSESS THE OPPOSITE MINDSET THAT MIGRATION IS A NORMAL PROCESS, STARTING FROM THE VERY BEGINNING OF THE CIVILIZATION. IN MY OPINION, PEOPLE LIVING IN POORER REGION ALWAYS TRY TO SETTLE IN ADVANCED COUNTRIES, AND THAT'S WHY IT CAN BE TERMED AS NATURAL RATHER THAN EXCEPTIONAL.
ON THE ONE HAND, HUMAN BEINGS BY BORN WANT TO EARN MORE AS WELL AS LEAD A PROSPEROUS LIFE WITH HIS KITH AND KIN. CONSEQUENTLY, AFTER COMPLETING THEIR EDUCATION, THEY ALWAYS SEARCH FOR OPPORTUNITIES IN EUROPE ALONG WITH AMERICA AS THESE COUNTRIES RENDER VAST OPPORTUNITIES THAN THAT OF HIS HOMELAND. FOR EXAMPLE, A STUDY CONDUCTED IN BANGLADESH, A MIDDLE-INCOME NATION OF SOUTH ASIA, ILLUSTRATES THAT A SIGNIFICANT PORTION OF ENGINEERS FOLLOWED BY DOCTORS APPEAR BEFORE QUALIFYING EXAMS LIKE GRE, IELTS, TOEFL TO SETTLE IN HOST COUNTRIES, AND THEY WANT TO LEAVE THEIR MOTHERLAND BY ANY MEANS. THAT’S WHY, ATTRACTING SUCH MERITORIOUS STUDENTS BY THE DEVELOPED NATIONS CAN BE DEFINED AS CHEATING AS THE POORER COUNTRIES INVESTED A HANDSOME AMOUNT OF MONEY ON THEIR EDUCATION, AND THEY ARE NOT GETTING ANYTHING IN RETURN.
ON THE OTHER HAND, IN MOST OF THE DEVELOPED AREAS, BIRTH RATE IS PLUMMETING DAY BY DAY, AND AS A RESULT, THEY SUFFER CRITICALLY FROM LACK OF EXPERIENCED WORKER IN ENGINEERING, MEDICINE, AND IT SECTORS. RESULTANTLY, IT FORMULATES VARIOUS TYPES OF IMMIGRATION SCHEME IN ORDER TO ATTRACT EXTRAORDINARY PROFESSIONALS SUCH AS DOCTORS FOLLOWED BY ENGINEERS ESPECIALLY COMPUTER ENGINEER AND FILL VACANCY IN THEIR COUNTRY. FOR INSTANCE, GERMANY, AN EUROPEAN NATION, RECENTLY INTRODUCED A PLAN TO WELCOME OUTLANDERS AS IT'S POPULATION IS DECREASING AS TIME PASSES, AND IT NEEDS PEOPLE TO REJUVENATE THE WHOLE ECONOMY ESPECIALLY EXPORT AND IMPORT. SO, FROM THIS PERSPECTIVE, SUCH BEHAVIOR SHOULD BE CONSIDERED AS ORDINARY. MOREOVER, SOME PEOPLE WANT OT FOLLOW THIS TREND WITH A VIEW TO LEAVING HIS WORN TORN REGION OR DEPRIVED LOCALITY, WHERE JOB, SECURITY IS NOTHING BUT A LUXURY.
IN CONCLUSION, THIRD WORLD SHOULD TRY BY ALL MEANS TO DISSUADE BRAIN DRAIN PROCESS AS IT IS A GREAT LOSS, AND NO NATION CAN NOT PUT AN EMBARGO ON TRANSMIGRATION BECAUSE IT IS A BASIC RIGHT OF A PERSON.
- SOME BELIEVE THAT THROUGH MIGRATION DEVELOPED COUNTRIES ARE STEALING FROM DEVELOPING NATIONS WHILE OTHERS SAY THAT MIGRATION IS NOTHING BUT A NATURAL PROCESS TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 89
- SOME BELIEVE THAT THROUGH MIGRATION DEVELOPED COUNTRIES ARE STEALING FROM DEVELOPING NATIONS WHILE OTHERS SAY THAT MIGRATION IS NOTHING BUT A NATURAL PROCESS TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 89
- SOME BELIEVE THAT THROUGH MIGRATION DEVELOPED COUNTRIES ARE STEALING FROM DEVELOPING NATIONS WHILE OTHERS SAY THAT MIGRATION IS NOTHING BUT A NATURAL PROCESS TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 89
- SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT ALLOWING CHILDREN TO MAKE THEIR OWN DECISION ON EVERYDAY MATTERS IS LIKELY TO RESULT IN A SOCIETY OF INDIVIDUALS WHO ONLY THINK ABOUT THEIR OWN WISHES OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS IMPORTANT FOR CHILDREN TO MAKE DECISION ABOUT M 84
- SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BEST TO ACCEPT A BAD SITUATION SUCH AS AN UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR SHORTAGE OF MONEY OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS BETTER TO TRY AND IMPROVE SUCH SITUATION DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: THAT'S
...RY TO SETTLE IN ADVANCED COUNTRIES, AND THATS WHY IT CAN BE TERMED AS NATURAL RATHER ...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: Than
... HUMAN BEINGS BY BORN WANT TO EARN MORE AS WELL AS LEAD A PROSPEROUS LIFE WITH HIS...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, moreover, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1914893617 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96720798448 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2966551356 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.666666667 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3333333333 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18403215308 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587514386551 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085600555211 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11194754178 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972884898118 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.