Some believe that younger family members should be responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally, and financially unable to look after themselves, while other people argue that this responsibility belongs to the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have differing views about whether or not grown-up children should be required to offer financial, physical and mental well-being for their parents and grandparents when they are not able to take good care of themselves. In my perspective, I hold the view that this burden should be shouldered not only by young family members but also the local authority.
On one hand, it is believed that the young relatives should be held accountable for the health of the elderly for some justifications, chief of which is about moral perspective. In fact, most senior family members devoted their lives to educate as well as support mentally and physically their offspring in college. By way of illustration, a large proportion of Vietnamese parents often bring up their children both emotionally and physical, so they are prone to have some health problems resulting from their hard and dedicated work in the past. Therefore, if the elder do not gain support from their offspring, they can suffer from more illness and even spend the rest of their life struggling with the pain in solitude, which is against the traditional moral base.
On the other hand, policy-makers should also share the pressure of looking after senior citizens for some reasons. One of the major rationales is that the elderly contributed to the national prosperity by paying taxes or gaining achievements at work. Hence, they should receive well-deserved care as the recognition of their great effort to the development of the country. This governmental support could take the form of retirement pension schemes or the public provision of free medical services, this might be regarded as the motivation for the young workforce to devote to their national economy.
To sum up, it is undeniable that the elders should be taken care by their children when above seventeen according to the standard of morality, while I agree that governmental involvement is of equal importance.
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13836477987 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85934665554 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6888506572 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241160942698 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939137730062 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583465253093 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146367651821 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538810511539 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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