Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skill What are the causes and suggest possible solutions

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Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills such as cooperative skill. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions.

It is true that nowadays fresh employees are not equipped with fundamental social skills in their workplace. There are a number of reasons behind this phenomenon, and it should have several solutions to tackle
There are two primary reasons why the workers lack basic interpersonal skills. One reason might derive from their own home life. Lot of families, these days, are no longer close as they were in the past. They rarely share and talk to each other, even their personal problems after their hard-working day. Meal times are not available because they are busy to pursue their personal interest rather than sit down, dine and share together. Furthermore, cooperation is not really encouraged at school. Individual achievement sounds more important than teamwork. Many teachers want to assess and evaluate the result individually because it is likely to judge in a fair way than group-work. Therefore, the students do not have great chances to practice and work together
Fortunately, several measures could be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be developing cooperative skills at school. It is essential to have more group-work activities in the curriculum to encourage the cooperation. Let’s take history subject as an example. The students might be required to do a presentation about a historic building in their neighborhood rather than do an exercise about a history event. Besides, extra-curricular activities should be adopted on weekends to reinforce the bonds between the students such as playing football, singing or dancing. In addition, the managers also need to enact strict rules at the working place to develop interpersonal skills of new staffs. They would have to find and work with senior employees or they might be fired soon
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for lacking of soft skills and steps should be taken to tackle this problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...er close as they were in the past. They rarely share and talk to each other, even their pers...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fair way" with adverb for "fair"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ividually because it is likely to judge in a fair way than group-work. Therefore, the student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22077922078 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80902516269 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600649350649 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0857797538 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5882352941 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19722639267 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559982725216 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588223121508 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118260039595 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209292984572 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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