Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is true that most students can broaden their knowledge and skills through watching television. I completely agree that they should watch TV regularly.
There are different advantages for children who regularly watch television in school. Firstly, interesting programs in television can help young people to draw inspiration and easily access a world of knowledge. For example, a lively and engaging video of a tree reaching maturity from a seed is clearer and simpler to understand than school textbooks alone to illustrate a biology lesson. Secondly, youngsters can not only enlarge their knowledge but also develop their soft skills through watching some kinds of TV shows. They may learn from watching others about how to give a good presentation or to gain confidence in a crowd.
Apart from the practical benefits of TV in the classroom, I believe that using television also has benefits for children at home. The television is an unlimited source of information with various channels about news, culture, science or nature. For example, if a young person want to travel but can not afford the fare, he or she may enjoy the journey by watching National Geographic short films. Furthermore, some programs provide an opportunity to narrow the generation gap between family members. For instance, while watching a documentary together, parents can share their enjoyment of a programme about the environment or an important historical event with their children, and take this occasion to chat with them about the issue raised.
In conclusion, I believe that television should be encouraged in and out of the study environment as a method of education to nurture essential skills for youngsters.
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- In some countries the government has tried to reduce traffic For instance they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour Do you think the development is positive or negative 85
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- Some children can learn more efficiently by watching Tv. Therefore, children should watch tv regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27941176471 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88310314367 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.42892231 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269064735428 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978410743867 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842941939594 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158391653104 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831241353288 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.