Nowadays, due to the development of technology, smartphone become valuable item for us, in contrast, there are a number of children use most of their time using this daily. There are a number of reasons for this trend, in my opinion, it could make harmful effects to their health and social lives.
The complicated algorithm and child’s knowledge are two main reasons for the attracting of the mobile devices. Firstly, most media and social app is using advanced artificial intelligent to tracking the customers to ensure that users will use more space on these. For example, if a person love cat and watch a video about this, the website will show them more contents about this which lead to more of attention. Secondly, young people frequently do not know about this trick and also have not enough control skill to themselves to resist these interesting things showed on their screen. As a result, they could spend more hours for this without the recognition about the amount of time have been wasted.
I believe that this could bring adverse affections to the health and the development of children. In the long term, the blue light from phone’s screen can cause to the poor vision and damage to our eyes, and also make poor effect to the sleep schedule. Besides that, children tend to make friend in online lives while loss real world relative people due to wasting hours for the devices. In addition, using the quality time with friends in person is one of the best ways to learn about social skills, communication and problem solving which they have tiny chance to gain in the virtual world.
In conclusion, it true that smartphones are useful for most of the world now but children who waste time for this day by day could result in various health problem and hinder child’s social development.
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The most important aim of science should be to improve people s lives To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'trues'?
Suggestion: trues
... the virtual world. In conclusion, it true that smartphones are useful for most of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82958199357 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42245349424 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.2577267547 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204495873577 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818533894102 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662414254475 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136304334979 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349498535329 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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