Today, lots of people are addicted to smartphones. It is often claimed that spending time on smartphones or tablets is bad habit for young children. I am completely convinced with this point that it would be harmful for them, although smart devices help people to overcome so many difficulties.
Obviously, the influence of the display devices could damage children's eyesights, nerv systems and also behaviours, if they are used for a long time. Additionally, it can be cause of lack of physical activities which is provide a laziness and an unhealthy lifestyle. However, there are some benefits using modern smartphones like chanse to learn new technologies and to be adoptable any kinds of functional applications.
Another factor that children pay less attention reading books and doing hometasks as a result of using smartphones. Afterwards, they may easily lose their impulse to education and it would be great drawback for their future career. Nevertheless, there are most children who are using smartphones in order to get knowledge from educational platforms or applications. And also they can improvve their social skills to handling people.
From my perspective, children who use smartphone a lot tend to play games and do some useless actions. It is truly waste of time for them. There are plenty of useful activities and games in order to relax rather than unnecessary virtual games.
To conclude, even though smartphones have so many beneficial apps and functions, it is clear that using too much is far from positive development for children. I think, parents should focus on children's leisure time to make efficient.
- Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies How does competitiveness affect individuals Is it a positive or negative trend 56
- In the past shopping was a routine domestic task Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby To what extent do you think this is a positive trend 61
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...d for a long time. Additionally, it can be cause of lack of physical activities which is...
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Line 2, column 220, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...of lack of physical activities which is provide a laziness and an unhealthy lifestyle. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22053231939 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94725127891 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7384751392 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181353717076 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541148375958 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423122208737 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967075151609 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295944868803 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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