Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones.
Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In today's world, cell phones take considerable amount of time from young ones. This occurs because parents replace the parental attention their children needs with technological gadgets, as well as peer pressures. In my opinion, I believe that this recent occurrence is a downward trend, owning to the fact that teenagers are less socially interactive and also imbibe vices learnt from the internet.
Arguably, excessive use of smartphones by today's youngsters has been due to lack of parental care and influence from co-equals. Recent parenthoods have made it a norm to compensate for the deficient time they exhibit towards their wards with smartphones. According to recent studies, children of this decade spend a large chunk of their time operating mobile phones due to their parents' carelessness. Another valid reason why teenagers overindulge their telephones is due to influence from their mates and they don't want to be excluded from the current trend. For example, statistics released by Apple company, revealed that the recent iphone model was purchased mostly by high school students due to recommendations from their peers.
Unfortunately, this latest practice are indicative of some unpleasant turn of events. Firstly, some teenagers have poor social interactions which is characterized by their inability to hold conversations for a reasonable amount of time. They prefer to indulge their online friends. To illustrate, it was observed that in a summer camp organized for young people, they interacted poorly with themselves but were rather engrossed with their smartphones. Secondly, children learn bad habits from the internet which they imbibe. For instance, some youths enjoy watching pornograhy videos, this has contributed to sexual misbehaviours displayed today.
In all to recapitulate, some children spend a lot of time on their phones daily because there is lack of parental attention and peer pressures. Therefore, I am of the opinion that this recent trend is a negative development in view of the fact that youngsters lack social interaction and pick up unpleasant morals from the cyberspace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47112462006 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95911603946 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580547112462 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3339581186 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214589381855 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743072469296 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509849021095 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141850315551 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274467116424 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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