Some companies are closing their offices one day per week to save energy gas electricity. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this ?
Problems related to scarcity of gas and electricity is on the elevation in this jet age of 21st century. Therefore, some organisations are taking appreciable step by closing their workplaces once in a week in order to save energy resources. Here, I will establish merits and demerits of this phenomenon.
A bunch of merits can be mentioned to support its brighter side. First and foremost, the role of closing offices once in a week is terrific to plunge the per capita consumption of utilities like gas and electricity. As a result, this approach contribute remarkably in reducing financial expenditure of an enterprise on account of decreasing per consumption of gas and electricity which in turn leads to optimisation of operations. Moreover, this trend will acts as a boon for ambience. To make it clear, fossil fuels are used to produce gas and electricity which emitts toxic gases in environment. Consequently, saving these resources will surely set the milestone of eco-friendly ambience. Needless to say, closing offices once in a week to save energy resources is a prudent approach. On the other side, opposite wind is also there.
To commence with, this approach not only have jeopardy impacts on the productivity of an organisation but also put enormous work pressure on personnel. To demonstrate, every organisation has to done work in standard time period, eliminating one day from schedule put extra burden on workforce to complete assigned work in determined time. Therefore, they are expected to become the victim of stress and anxiety. It is apparently seen that this phenomenon not only decline the profitability of companies but also adversely affect the work efficiency of employees.
To recapitulate, undeniably, this trend has detrimental impacts on the productivity of companies. However, advantages of this trend can never be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31313131313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2061121609 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3881856417 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8235294118 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4705882353 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331084555078 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814387919535 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715212725358 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167774688157 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866594613306 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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