Nowadays, the advertisement of products is the first priority of businessmen because it helps to enhance the sales of the business. Some entrepreneurs choosing the sports field to advertise their products. Few people believed that this method of advertising have a lot of disadvantages and on the other hand some people are opposed this statement. According to my perspective, companies are sponsor the sports so they have benefits rather than disadvantages. In this essay, I will give the appropriate reason as well as examples.
To begin with, advertising is a vital part of the business world. Today, few companies do the advertisements through sponsoring sports and it also have a lot of benefits. one major benefit is that when companies sponsor the games they give the advertise during the match like they give their brand name on the players t-shirts, play the small ads on LCD screens. As consequence, those brands get the attraction of customers and after that people buy their products which help to increase the sale of companies. take IPL cricket matches as an example, In India, different cricket teams play the IPL matches and mostly business persons sponsor these matches every year. Most famous reliance ltd. company invest a huge amount in this match and they also promote their new brands. In last year, the reliance company sponsor the IPL matches and after that, the sales of the new product rapidly increased. Another benefit is that, if companies are not sponsoring the sports, so it leads to enhance the burden to the government. When sports are organized on a large level they need a huge amount of funds. Although the government also invest money in sports organized, it is a cumbersome task for high authority to sponsor the sports without the support of companies. According to my opinion, when companies sponsor the sports they also support the government because after sponsoring the business the government invest a little amount in games rather than the full amount.
Moreover, when companies give the advertise during the matches so they become the cause of the destruction of players and they can not give their better performance. Secondly, these ads attract the buyer to purchase the product and some consumers buying that product without any need. As a result, this thing made the people impulsive buyers. For example, if any mobile phone do the advertisement during the match of the new brand so people could be influenced by the features of mobile and they purchase that mobile without any need.
To conclude, While advertising has a few disadvantages, they have a lot of benefits for business as well as for the government. When businessman sponsoring any game event it is fruitful for their business because it enhance the sale of their company.
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children s sports between 2008 and 2014 The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period 78
- The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment What are the causes of this What can be done to solve this problem 73
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages to this Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...s through sponsoring sports and it also have a lot of benefits. one major benefit is...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...rts and it also have a lot of benefits. one major benefit is that when companies sp...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n companies sponsor the games they give the advertise during the match like they give their b...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...help to increase the sale of companies. take IPL cricket matches as an example, In I...
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Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Company
...s every year. Most famous reliance ltd. company invest a huge amount in this match and ...
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Line 3, column 1023, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o enhance the burden to the government. When sports are organized on a large level t...
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Line 3, column 1286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of companies. According to my opinion, when companies sponsor the sports they a...
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Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nt. Moreover, when companies give the advertise during the matches so they become the c...
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Line 8, column 217, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... fruitful for their business because it enhance the sale of their company.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06277056277 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73850928546 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4329004329 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8243131412 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.695652174 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0869565217 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224569743416 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725355055925 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551245388237 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149637151545 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855777616038 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...s through sponsoring sports and it also have a lot of benefits. one major benefit is...
^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...rts and it also have a lot of benefits. one major benefit is that when companies sp...
^^^
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n companies sponsor the games they give the advertise during the match like they give their b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...help to increase the sale of companies. take IPL cricket matches as an example, In I...
^^^^
Line 3, column 695, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Company
...s every year. Most famous reliance ltd. company invest a huge amount in this match and ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1023, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o enhance the burden to the government. When sports are organized on a large level t...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of companies. According to my opinion, when companies sponsor the sports they a...
^^
Line 6, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nt. Moreover, when companies give the advertise during the matches so they become the c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 217, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... fruitful for their business because it enhance the sale of their company.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06277056277 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73850928546 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4329004329 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8243131412 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.695652174 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0869565217 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08695652174 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224569743416 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725355055925 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551245388237 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149637151545 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855777616038 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.