Nowadays, the advertisement of products is the first priority of businessmen because it helps to enhance the sales of the business. Some entrepreneurs choosing the sports field to advertise their products. Few people believed that this method of advertising have a lot of disadvantages and on the other hand some people are opposed to this statement. According to my perspective, companies are sponsoring the sports so they have benefits rather than disadvantages.
To begin with, advertising is a vital part of the business world. Today, few organizations do the advertisements through sponsoring sports and it also have a lot of benefits. One major benefit is that when corporation sectors sponsoring the games they give the advertise during the match like they give their brand name and logo's on the players t-shirts, play the small ads on LCD screens. As consequence, those brands get the attraction of customers and after that people buy their products which enhance the sale of companies. take IPL cricket matches as an example, In India, different business persons give the funds in cricket IPL matches, Most famous reliance ltd. the company sponsoring the IPL match and they also promote their new brands after that, the sales of the new product rapidly increased. Another benefit is that, if companies are not sponsoring the sports, so it leads to enhance the burden to the government. When sports are organized on a large level they need a huge amount of funds. Although the government also provided the funds for organizing the sports, it is a cumbersome task for high authorities to sponsor the sports without the support of companies. As companies are sponsoring the sports they also support the government. According to my opinion, advertising in sports are not only beneficial for business but also support the government.
Moreover, when companies give the advertise during the matches so they become the cause of the destruction of players and they can not give their better performance. Secondly, these ads attract the buyer to purchase the product and some consumers buying that product without any need. As a result, this thing made the people impulsive buyers.
To conclude, While advertising has a few disadvantages, they have a lot of benefits for business as well as for the government. When businessmen sponsoring any game event it is fruitful for their business because it enhanced the scale of sales
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88857983796 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462121212121 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2774084807 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.3 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222254646164 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764156965201 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055952188832 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150456774934 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788280662617 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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