In some coubtries yonger people are increasingly losing interest in their teaching? Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation.
Teachers plays a vital role to improve the academic performance to students. In this essay, I am going for examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some of the practical policies that authorities could implement to tackle the problems of teaching occupation.
The first step is to understand why is this happening? Broadly speaking, there are two or three main reasons for this. The first and foremost reason is lower salaries of teachers profession but, on the other side; doctor, engineer and lawyer receive highly pay scale. Moreover, the less salary of teachers have affect on household lifestyle. Consequently, this is the responsibility of government to increase the teacher salaries of government teachers so, that they receive handsome amount of money. So, the teachers can proper attention to students and help to built the overall development of the students.
In addition to this, an teachers are often over-worked and burden with non-teaching activities that is add to their work. They perform a lot of duties regarding functions and other sports activities so that is stressful role in teacher life. Apart from all this, sometimes over work is affect health and schedule. The best solution is that the government agencies should bring a work of instructor during vacation period also teacher can relief in their hectic schedule so that younger children relocate their mind to teaching profession. Beside, they want earning higher scale salary and fully enjoyment life. Youngest should interest for teaching profession. This is highly significant role to motivate young one towards teaching occupation. The best epitome of this is United state of America professors earn more money that they manage our expenses and enjoy our life so, young people have interest to go to teaching profession.
To summarize, I personally believe that it is the responsibility of authorities to make some laws to motivate young ones to move teaching profession.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, apart from, broadly speaking, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31847133758 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81563965853 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0416040925 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2352941176 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191203387703 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621960030863 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476316285757 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106079825615 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312740440595 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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