Some people think that several short holidays from school are better, while others think one long summer holidays for the year is better for children. Discuss both points and include your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that holiday season is perfect time to relax our mind or body. One of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that which holidays is better for children; either it is short break holidays or long holidays? I shall explore the dimentions of this topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of argument there are group of people who believe that short time holidays is better for children. The first and foremost reason is performance of academic subjects. In addition to this, in short break students have proper attention to studies, and also feel relax. Morever, children have time to go to short vacations to rejuvinate our mind and soul and also become knowledgeable which is fruitful for every situation. Consequently, short summer holidays feel energetic to learn well and also expected to study with positive confidence which is beneficial for future.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why long term holidays is good. In that vacation, children can learn plenty of practical skills: painting, music and so on which can enhance our knowledge. In spite of this, those students who does not proper concentration on study in school time, they have the opportunity to learn such activities in long term vacation. Furthermore, some students have better in another field and bright their future. For instance, a survey conducted by university of delhi reveals that they 40 out of 50 students develop their IQ level and also enhance our practical skills during long term holidays.
All in all, weighing both the opinions, I tend to believe that there is no single conlusion, I take this ground on the effective clap require both use of hands so, school should be given vacations to students according to the level of students and which we are develop our mind and build their overall personality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...acation. Furthermore, some students have better in another field and bright their...
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... the level of students and which we are develop our mind and build their overall person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, regarding, so, well, for instance, in addition, in short, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58251331071 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7579674795 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.428571429 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270409566486 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983011440663 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100059102623 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161440001469 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817920416511 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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