Some countries are not popular with using a bicycle even though it is beneficial for them. Why?
What are the possible solutions to encourage people to use more of bicycle as the main transport?
Cycling is beneficial for individuals’ health and for the environment. However it is not popular among people for several reasons. The main reason could be due to the children and the physical exhaustion. To solve this issue, the government could provide the bicycle friendly facilities and monorails. This essay will discuss about the reasons for unpopularity in riding a bicycle and discuss in details about the government policies on providing bicycle friendly facilities and monorails.
There are several possible causes leading people to be get discouraged from riding bicycle. Exhaustion, impossibility long distance trips, and children could be one issues, but the main causes can be the children. In other words, it may not be possible for children to bike for long distanced, which also could be why it is difficult for families to plan cycling trips. Children may not possible riding for a long distance and it could be difficult for a family to plan a trip by a bicycle. Therefore, people may not plan for their journey done by riding a bicycle.
In addition to this, people may not plan a long trip by riding a bicycle because of all the storage issues. Since people have to carry many lots of things that adds more weight to their ride and result in more tiredness. Therefore, due to the tiredness and storage issues, people would not use the bicycle as the main form of transport to travel.
To solve these issues, the government could provide some useful facilities. The government could provide the monorails for inadequate riders (children and elders). The government could place the mono rails next to the bicycle lanes. Therefore, this could relax people and make it easy to travel with a family.
Furthermore, the government can provide the "rider-friendly facilities". The cyclists would not have to carry all the heavy stuffs with their bike riding, because they can simply ride until the facility areas where it provides food, drink, met, bicycle storage, shower booths and tents. To do that, the provision of the riders-friendly facilities can encourage people to ride a bicycle for a journey.
In conclusion, despite all other reasons for people to not riding a bike, the children and the impossibility of long trips could be the main reason. The government could introduce various facilities to help cyclists to ride comfortably in order to encourage the use of bicycle.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263392857143 0.247107183377 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.131696428571 0.155533422707 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078125 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401785714286 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0223214285714 0.0437548338989 51% => OK
Prepositions: 0.09375 0.122226691241 77% => OK
Participles: 0.0267857142857 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89673983528 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.046875 0.0326793684256 143% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116071428571 0.0861772015684 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0491071428571 0.021408717616 229% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00892857142857 0.011925033212 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2426.0 1933.35771543 125% => OK
No of words: 396.0 316.048096192 125% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12626262626 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20517956788 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.381313131313 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.287878787879 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186868686869 0.203846283523 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116161616162 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89673983528 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426767676768 0.56093040696 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.9404325773 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9281230004 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.272727273 127.492653851 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 46.7878787879 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.97701149425 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450815804374 0.332605444948 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195293889814 0.102741220458 190% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131601591924 0.0668466124924 197% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604075461767 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143663332305 0.148594505496 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188257613402 0.134430193775 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714683016036 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.369870216321 0.324371583561 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.06833988169 0.0638462369009 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295945415844 0.228012699653 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370808998449 0.058150111329 64% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.41683366733 234% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 21.0 10.4468937876 201% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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