Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?
One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that crime perpetration is rising in a sizeable amount in some parts of the world, while others oppose it. There is a wide spread worry that would only led to myriad of concern in one's life. It seems to me that this opprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
To commence with, there are deluge of arguments to support my stance. The most prepondent on is unemployment in nation as a result of this, people do not have money to fulfil their needs then they perpetrate crime for it such as robbery, kidnapping. It cannot only contribute to upsurging criminal act leads to numerous other effect in various fields thanks to wide range of advantages that employment offers masses can enhance the quality and productivity of their lives with efficacy and canvenienc. Needless to say, all these mouls sland in a good stead as far as argumenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aformentinond propositions is that is only likely to help one excel and thrive in varied areas besides, lack of awareness about crime in people. Dwellers use less security in their lives like sharing their personal matters with unknowns ,as well as easily do trust on others. It gives a chance to offenders to commit crime easily. Fore instance the study results published by the government of Australia is clearly indicate that privacy of people personal life is a crucial and critical for the development of society
One the other hand, a section of society contradicts the above said view by providing some justification. They ponder that enhancing police force in city crime areas is also helpful to tackle this problem. Since police can reach on crime area on time and caught the criminal readily. Therefore it is clear why they are not favoring the former view.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated, it is crystal clear that benefits employment indeed too great to ignore.
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- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69525320407 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611594202899 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3032958565 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171326520566 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522210755765 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380999359491 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839416184798 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298802510044 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.